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idk sounds like it would be distracting.
as i said, it wouldn't to me lolol
Totally agreed. Or is it more like...let Ian be the one who delivers the flashback? maybe he got the memory and that's when the flashback started. Now the flashback is too out of place to me.
kinda agree w the people in here ngl. i don't HATE it. i like that i read and know it. but it would've been so much better, WAY more interesting (imo. please dont send me 3 paragraph replies, i wont read it.) if it were a flashback, present, flashback, present sorta thing.