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Chapter 80 in a nutshell:

JH: I miss u
YO: well, u broke ur promise and came to see me...
JH: *trembling*
YO: (' - ' )
JH: ┗( T﹏T )┛
YO: .... Hospital ig?
JH: NO! We go to ma HOME!
YO: .... Ffs
JH: *puppy noises*
YO: DAFUQ u wanna dry my f hair?
JH: yesh
YO: alright, time to get out of here!
JH: WAIT
YO: leave me alone I beg... *has breakdown *
JH: *shocked*
YO: *continues in having a meltdown and breakdown*
JH: *hugs* (like yeah, do hug the person who hates ur guts, why not ((plus did y'all see how YO immediately tried to shake out of the hug, hurt my heart)))
YO: *crying his soul out*
JH: IT WAS ALL MY FAULT IM SO SORRY FOR CONFESSING TO U (did not say sorry for everything else), HOW ELSE CAN I SHOW U THAT I LOVE U (sounds pretty pathetic)
YO: *GASP* say that again!!
JH: I LIKE U MORE THAN U THINK (as if he would know, he probably thinks that is a f joke and u toying again w him. "more than u think" is such a shit way to say it, is like YO is the one who is dumb in not seeing HOW~ MUCH~ JH 'loves' him, mothafuvka I'll break ur f jaw)

4 WEEK TIME SKIP BC WHY BOTHER SHOW US THE MOST IMPORTANT MOMENT OF THEM TALKING THINGS OUT AND SHARING THEIR FEELINGS, AM I RIGHT? WHO NEEDS THAT PFFF NOT US!

Also WHAT A GREAT IDEA TO START DATING AFTER THIS! YO HAS UNRESOLVED FEELINGS AND FEELS GRIEF AND IS STILL PRETTY HURT BUT WHO CARES, JH FOR SURE DOESNT, I BET HE FORCED YO TO DATE HIM AFTER THAT HUG BC WHY THE FUVK NOT.

Imagine you talk w ur ex-partner how much grief and hurt they caused u and how they still haunt u, they then see u break down bc they just couldn't leave u alone to heal and force their body close to urs to hug, u wanting not their touch bc u f traumatized and hurt, them then confessing their feelings and also telling u how u are blind and cannot see their true love for u (bc hey, ur fault ig that u can't see it right? It's not like they didnt try to show it nor even put effort in it, not like they sent u mixed messages all the time u were together and laughed at u when u had feelings, right?) and they wanna prove it but don't know how (bc in reality they don't wanna put any effort in it), u being happy w them confessing but still hate them. BECOME A COUPLE RIGHT THERE RIGHT NOW BC WHY THE FUCK NOT, is not like they caused u so much hurt, right....


what JH actually meant: SURE, U STILL HAVE HATE TOWARDS ME BUT IDC, I MISS U AND I MISS THAT HOLE.

rest of the chapter is some f ocean scene where we learn that JH is a stalker, probably cannot wait to fuck YO, admits he busy but says he has more time than YO, so he keeps teasing YO, nothing changed and he still has a snake tongue.

Wow what a way to rush the ending. I bet w y'all that in the side stories we will not really see YO and JH struggling w the main plot stuff that are still unresolved, I'm sure it would feel like two different characters.


I hate on JH a lot bc he could have been so much better, like at chapter 70 or so he could have been written so much better...or fine let chapter 78 and 79 be as it is but then have chapter 80 be the talk on the road and the hospital visit, chapter 81 for them heading to JH's house and having the confrontation w the breakdown of YO, chapter 82 opening w the hug and then JH confessing or idk and then them talking, chapter 83 w them figuring things out and if they still need time to date or if they already wish to be a pair, chapter 84 opening up w them together and we see their daily work like and daily life talk, chapter 85 being the end chapter w them going on a date and being happy.

BooOMb, much better and less rushed and we actually see COMMUNICATION!!!!!



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