Facepalm

PEACHY CARROT February 9, 2024 5:54 am

I came to check a dialouge everyone was talking about and in the eng it isn't noticeable but wow what a disappointment. The dialouge is a huge turn off. Basically when yahwi said "that's one way turn a guy soft" after seeing Jooin have condoms, it implies seeing condoms like that will make their pp soft, implying if someone saw that they wouldn't want continue and lost desire... Author you're supposed make this look passionate wtf is this?

Curiosity settled. Have a good day.

Responses
    Ash_bury February 9, 2024 6:04 am

    I feel like he was implying that jooin was having a lot of sex and needed condoms. He hadn’t slept with anyone since and I think he was upset thinking jooin had all these partners this whole time. That’s why jooin said it’s not what you think

    PEACHY CARROT February 9, 2024 6:22 am

    Yea that's exactly what he's implying. Jooin didn't need to defend himself either way because why can't he, they weren't together anyway. I find it distasteful it was written in as if its was wrong for Jooin to have partners during that time and make yahwi imply he lost desire after he saw the condoms. It's not cute.

    PEACHY CARROT February 9, 2024 6:25 am
    Yea that's exactly what he's implying. Jooin didn't need to defend himself either way because why can't he, they weren't together anyway. I find it distasteful it was written in as if its was wrong for Jooin to... PEACHY CARROT

    If they wanted to include a way to say Jooin was single the whole time they could've done it better than in a degraded way. Like Jooin saying he's been single and alone since yahwi left.

    Kari February 9, 2024 8:11 am

    It kind of gave me the ick when I read that. I didn’t like the way the authors made it sound like Yahwi was “shaming” Jooin for it when it’s not bad at all. At least Jooin had protection and he shouldn’t have to explain himself because as you said they weren’t together and a lot of time passed. It wasn’t cute at all and it suddenly brought me back to season 1. Also the thing about the condoms not fitting when an average condom can fit a whole arm if someone wants to... yeah idk what’s going on these last chapters but it is what it is.

    PEACHY CARROT February 9, 2024 8:32 am
    It kind of gave me the ick when I read that. I didn’t like the way the authors made it sound like Yahwi was “shaming” Jooin for it when it’s not bad at all. At least Jooin had protection and he shouldn�... Kari

    Exactly that was my problem, like this is supposed to be about two lovers enjoying their time but made into something a bit shaming. Then proceed with cringe dialouge. I instantly knew the two reasons they wanted to add it

    1. Say Jooin hasn't slept or been with anyone during the timeskip
    2. Say Yahwi "big"

    Please a snug condom can fit any size, I think it's stupid BL writes always write that in. This should've been a sensual moment but it felt like a teenage wattpad story.

    GODZILLA February 9, 2024 10:12 am

    PFTTT I came here too to check out the line people were referring too. I was able see the spanish and korean versions. The english is close to the korean line while the spanish is still saying the same message but explained it more detailed. But I agree with your take. This was a whole miss opportunity. It's been years you think they make it passionate as you said they should and make Jooin be seductive but he's acting like he was in season one. Definitely disappointing.

    chopin87 February 9, 2024 10:57 am

    This is simply trash writing at his best. Ad as if it wasn't enough what you pointed out, even the reply is worse: "None of these fits", like he scanned all the drawer one by one e not just because he wants to paint the MC like a poor slut who will still want to do it without protection. And then there are still braindeads out here writing poems about how much everyone has grown up in this story. Like GTFO, if you don't have basic comprehension skills!

    PEACHY CARROT February 9, 2024 11:20 am
    PFTTT I came here too to check out the line people were referring too. I was able see the spanish and korean versions. The english is close to the korean line while the spanish is still saying the same message ... GODZILLA

    Can I ask what the korean directly says?

    GODZILLA February 9, 2024 11:27 am
    Can I ask what the korean directly says? PEACHY CARROT

    "Way to make my erection die/go away, Jooin"
    Basically, saying his ity weenie got soft and is no longer standing

    PEACHY CARROT February 9, 2024 11:35 am
    "Way to make my erection die/go away, Jooin"Basically, saying his ity weenie got soft and is no longer standing GODZILLA

    My goodness this chapter should've been written like a first love embrace by its all child play writing thank you for answering me tho. Maybe they'll improve next chapter.