Was the slap supposed to make things even now(when yahwi slap Jooin)? Instead of showing yahwi growth, you put in one apology and a slap to make up for it . I know you can write better than that.
*to clarify when I said "showing yahwi growth" I meant show us on screen, us as readers seeing the growth for, not only him, but show Jooin the change too, not through a timeskip. It should've happen before not after.
I saw a discussion about this. That the writer wrote Jooin not liking to settle things in violence/aggression but made him commit a aggressive act to settle things. The reason being is to stop some reader from bringing what yahwi did to Jooin up again
That could be a reasonable reason but I'm sure that won't stop them because the difference here is yahwi gave permission for jooin. While the first time yahwi slap jooin out of anger. That's why i find this part written badly because it's not something to parallel/symbolize(??) in a good light.
Didn't something like this happen before? Where yahwi force jooin to slap him to make up for something and Jooin yelled how does that make things work. Well well...
Was the slap supposed to make things even now(when yahwi slap Jooin)? Instead of showing yahwi growth, you put in one apology and a slap to make up for it . I know you can write better than that.
*to clarify when I said "showing yahwi growth" I meant show us on screen, us as readers seeing the growth for, not only him, but show Jooin the change too, not through a timeskip. It should've happen before not after.