I really really really liked the details in this story!!!
The way Kazushi (light hair) was made; why his initial reaction to being utterly rejected wasn't just a neutral determination but rather an adoration for Yuta being the fact that he got warned on their first meeting, and his confession being "the perfect timing" because it's the reverse of the situation where he fell in love
The title being south and north pole of a magnet or sota and nazuki (not quite sure of the name) also added a hint of joy in my day!
Yuta was probably less developed for a main character in my opinion but he is a distinct individual who's mostly more emotionless rather than emotional so the scene when he cried really made me awww at him... Before I rationalized it I found myself holding some affection towards him
All in all I think this is a perfect example on how to use short format for the shounen ai category
I really really really liked the details in this story!!!
The way Kazushi (light hair) was made; why his initial reaction to being utterly rejected wasn't just a neutral determination but rather an adoration for Yuta being the fact that he got warned on their first meeting, and his confession being "the perfect timing" because it's the reverse of the situation where he fell in love
The title being south and north pole of a magnet or sota and nazuki (not quite sure of the name) also added a hint of joy in my day!
Yuta was probably less developed for a main character in my opinion but he is a distinct individual who's mostly more emotionless rather than emotional so the scene when he cried really made me awww at him... Before I rationalized it I found myself holding some affection towards him
All in all I think this is a perfect example on how to use short format for the shounen ai category