I liked this story, but the plotholes and the tangents are getting kinda tiring. I totally...

aerslevdi January 28, 2024 3:36 am

I liked this story, but the plotholes and the tangents are getting kinda tiring. I totally forgot her original plan at one point. I really like the whole family dynamic thing and her growing, but the whole harem is starting to seem kinda ridiculous and dragged out. I'm more invested in her relationship with her family than in the romance part.

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