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oxbull11 January 26, 2024 5:52 pm

It was good story I cannot lie, originally I was gonna drop this because all the bottom was doing was doing was whining, and throwing tantrums and shit like that then I thought after reading some comments oh it must get better and I can't give up, so I continued reading and it did get better, I liked the story more and more and I liked how the bottom also grew as the story progressed. Some things didn't make sense like the backstory of the mummy or the sudden reveal of nian not having a mother or smth, but it didn't effect the story that much.

So yes the story was good, ending was dead rushed ngl and it was abrupt but it was a good story nonetheless 4.5-5/5

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