Am I the only one feeling this way?

dat_ass January 25, 2024 9:12 pm

Their actions are weird. I keep expecting them to do something smart but everytime they do dumb things.
It's like the author wants to make them smart but doesn't know how to

Responses
    Gurl January 26, 2024 12:26 pm

    I literally thought the same!!! Like they just don't have that mysterious aura that compels the reader to keep reading the story?? Its like something's lacking!!

    dat_ass January 26, 2024 4:39 pm
    I literally thought the same!!! Like they just don't have that mysterious aura that compels the reader to keep reading the story?? Its like something's lacking!! Gurl

    Exactly.
    In the chapter where the uke was escaping from the building the author just cuts the part where he escapes to make him seem cool. But it didn't make sense as it was way too high up.

    Also the CHP where the uke just gives the seme his contact info IT MAKES NO SENSE. You are a conman why are you giving your ACTUAL CONTACT INFO????

    Gurl January 27, 2024 5:16 am
    Exactly.In the chapter where the uke was escaping from the building the author just cuts the part where he escapes to make him seem cool. But it didn't make sense as it was way too high up.Also the CHP where th... dat_ass

    I literally thought the same in these exact scenes!!!!

    lil_Ms.J January 28, 2024 3:59 am

    Glad someone else saw it