Don't make story if you can't make a good plot.

Boxy January 25, 2024 2:12 pm

I only got to chapter 11 before I stopped reading this is just horrible (no offense to the original author). Its always the story's that go to fast or romanticize rape, I barley remembered the MLs names before it got to the sex bit(which was basically rape). I also hate when characters "fall in love" and then someone else just randomly pops in. Even though I haven't read the whole thing I can see some others agree. It also seemed the author just wanted to skip everything and get through it quickly. if you're to busy to make a good story, don't make one at all. This is all my honest opinion

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