this story isn’t terrible but definitely not great either… 100% a turn your brain off kind of story lol, if you do that you’ll enjoy it much more!!
classic story of ML is possessive & red flag while FL is naive & dense. FL i can understand to an extent considering she was abused / neglected her whole life, of course she will cling to the first sign of “affection” that is shown her way.
ML is definitely weird & the fact that he hides EVERYTHING from her is infuriating. she has shown multiple times that she loves & trusts him (even when he doesn’t deserve it) but i feel like he doesn’t give her anything in return.
also i think another thing ruining the story is the excessive censoring… you literally can’t see anything because of the whiting out of everything
if you want some classic smut with weird plot, turn your brain off & you’ll enjoy the story!!
this story isn’t terrible but definitely not great either… 100% a turn your brain off kind of story lol, if you do that you’ll enjoy it much more!!
classic story of ML is possessive & red flag while FL is naive & dense. FL i can understand to an extent considering she was abused / neglected her whole life, of course she will cling to the first sign of “affection” that is shown her way.
ML is definitely weird & the fact that he hides EVERYTHING from her is infuriating. she has shown multiple times that she loves & trusts him (even when he doesn’t deserve it) but i feel like he doesn’t give her anything in return.
also i think another thing ruining the story is the excessive censoring… you literally can’t see anything because of the whiting out of everything
if you want some classic smut with weird plot, turn your brain off & you’ll enjoy the story!!