Loved the idea POOR EXCECUTION (▰˘◡˘▰)
Exactly
I agree! The story and plot idea is good but feels like a rough draft. It's missing a lot and was very rushed. Same with the art, it's not bad but could use some fine tuning. But what I dislike the most is the fact the uke didn't really like the seme at all and then all of a sudden did a complete 180. I personally don't really enjoy slow burn but give us some sort of development before diving into you're the love of my life lol it cracked me up that the seme was like let me mark you! and the next scene was them just finding out their ages then going right back to "I love you so much" like do y'all even know each other's favorite color? Food?? Movie??? Had great potential but fell short unfortunately. Still enjoyed it though!
There were so many poorly executed plots my god. We never knew what happened to the guy at the beginning who fired his dad or the lawsuit. The top I didn't get what punishment the top got from his past life, like, he just got to reincarnate unto a rich family and found his love again while the bottom was killed in his past life, came back struggling and got with the top while struggling a bit more. The cousin who frame the top didn't get retribution or anything. Like everything went so ficking fast... This was overall a bad story and I'm so pissed because I rarely type when I don't like something but I was expecting so much more.