I hope this ends soon. A better writer would not be dragging in this out when the outcome ...

rhjames January 19, 2024 10:29 pm

I hope this ends soon. A better writer would not be dragging in this out when the outcome has been obvious since the start.

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    KIMI WA SHOJO NANO? January 19, 2024 11:02 pm

    You know we all say this

    But if you were given a pen do you think you could do better????

    It’s just a question
    No hate

    rhjames January 20, 2024 6:50 am
    You know we all say thisBut if you were given a pen do you think you could do better????It’s just a question No hate KIMI WA SHOJO NANO?

    No I don't, but I've never claimed to be a writer. But being a writer isn't a requirement for being able to point out bad writing. And most of the recent comments are talking about the bad writing.

    KIMI WA SHOJO NANO? January 20, 2024 7:02 am
    No I don't, but I've never claimed to be a writer. But being a writer isn't a requirement for being able to point out bad writing. And most of the recent comments are talking about the bad writing. rhjames

    Ik ik
    Of course I also don’t like how the story is being dragged
    Tbh I skipped a lot of panels in this chapter

    But it’s the way you put the comment