Its a cute story but lacks in some things. i feel like the development of this became stag...

bruh January 18, 2024 7:52 pm

Its a cute story but lacks in some things. i feel like the development of this became stagnant the moment brown hair boy's rejection was completely ignored.

Its like It didnt even happen!

but fr, i was just trying to make things make sense in my head.

From the start the own story gives us subtle signals that Brown hair kid and black hair are to be endgame!!

In a sense i get why he ends up with grey hair kid. Hes a naive kid in his "First love", the one we dont know how deal with, and fall prisioner of our feelings. Hes discovering himself... Of course he wouldnt make the right choice at the first time, we never do.

Still, It would be lovely If there was a sequence to this! i still find the story kinda ass, and yes, im trying to make things haver a sense so i dont feel bad for wasting my time reading this.

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    Bruh January 22, 2024 12:57 am

    Bestie it’s okay, I totally agree. Beside the two other “MLs” (the mcs best friend and childhood friend) being a total joke, he developed strong relationships with the black haired guy and the president (if i remember correctly, that’s the gray haired guy right?) But after the fall out of MC and president due to a tiring miscommunication trope, he becomes attached to the hip with black haired guy and they both develop really well as characters.

    But instead of using this as a way for him to move on from his many shitty crushes and awful people around him, no no, let’s have him forgive everything and run back to the president after avoiding him for so long. It’s like he used black haired to feel better, and then returned to his one true love once he was okay again. What’ll happen next time they misunderstand each other?

    Now I’m not saying that they don’t fit each other but the author knew damn well what they were doing when they tried tricking us. And I was tricked. And I’m so pissed. I dropped it before the MC ended up with the president because I refuse to get tricked any further.