I read a lot of dumb or not great things but this is just bad the plot looks like they put random things together. For me pacing is terrible too. Don't get me wrong I like fuvked up things but this is just so shallow and boring. Pawn's revenge was great and it's the same author? I don't know I just don't think it's polished enough.
I read a lot of dumb or not great things but this is just bad the plot looks like they put random things together. For me pacing is terrible too. Don't get me wrong I like fuvked up things but this is just so shallow and boring. Pawn's revenge was great and it's the same author? I don't know I just don't think it's polished enough.