are u drunk author?

Azi January 16, 2024 3:55 pm

I'm on chapter 35.
this really caught me. the fl suffering, you can feel it how miserable she was in her father's fam before the marriage. you can see the glimpse how cruel the past was with the commoner and being illegitimate. this is different to some fl sob back story who didnt much leave details or vivid scenarios happen but just treated that they suffer and move on to that story.

The only thing that still keeping bugging in my mind. if the author is drunk? from several chapter before she got married. the author vividly see us how she got whipped, punch and kicked. I'm on chapter 35 now but no fvcking one realize the whipped back on the fl. she got whipped many times but theres no scar in her back. most of the scene in the fl after marriage was she have a smooth back. she also use off shoulder than the closed one and there's no scars in her back but her hands have scars. she have repeatedly whipped from when she was taking care the pig pen and when she's learning the noble etiquette. so there's a possibility to leave a mark on the skin but no. there's no scars on her back but she still have scars on hands from when she was not exposed to being illegitimate. this is so absurb. the duke's hand leave a scar after slicing his hands and yet the repeatedly whipped to the fl cannot be scene and there's no scene where medicine apply to her or there's magic in this timeline that can remove the scar easily.

there's so many people here and there's maid from the husband side and her hair is not long so there's a possibility that the scar on her back can be exposed. but nooooo. from the first time she's become no one discover it yet.

The smooth and flawless back of the fl really annoy me coz her scar from the manor feels like author discard her suffering that's why there's still no one notice her scar on the back. his husband didn't notice too. no matter how long a yr was and the scar without treatment can leave a mark and yet after married life it's gone there's no tiny scar can be seen. ghad that part really annoyed me especially when she's using off shoulder or taking a bath.

if they got whipped, kicked and punch. there's a visible part to leave a scar but no it's none existence. which is so annoying to see (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

ill change my mind if someone discover it after continuing reading.


I'm on chapter 75 now. I leave my thoughts here again.

the ml have this scar on the back when he take off his clothes in daylight to get the attention of the mc. there's so many marks of scars can be seen at ml back. as I read on, the scars is from when he was a child and get hit by stick when he also learning from his uncle. it's funny how ml hit have proof on his back from his childhood while the fl was hit at the back on her childhood and when she's an teenager learning a noble which is before their marriage and yet there's no fvcking scar can be seen. which is so absurb. this is the only thing that bother me so far in the story. they make her pitipul and yet her body still stay as white and flawless at the back even though she suffer so much.. I find that unbelievable.
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i'm on chapter 96. oh gash. her back is really flawless without a scar. lmao. she's not a saint yet her wounds from the hit at the back are healed. flawless, white as snow skin without damage. the wound from the dagger are gone too. in her childhood days, they can't use much med to apply wounds or can't get doctor to check up on them because they are commoner and poor. but here on chapter 96 there's no tiny bit scar left of her past behind. it's like a magic that her past wounds didn't exist. stupid creator.. they forgot that she was heavily injured from child to adult and yet they make her flawless skin. no matter how she act as a noble her deep scars(physically) won't fade especially if it's repeatedly happen. but I guess who ever make this become dumb to remember her past. so ml won't take pity her wounded body. and that every guy who see her would lust her that's why they make the mc back white and flawless as possible. lol

finish reading at 145. the story is okay. you'll see the villain suffering like a karma. author make you see the glimpse of what happen to the villains than ending it up as them dying, strip title or end up in jail and they are out of the story. this is refreshing to see that you'll know what's happening on their current lives. you'll see different version of suffering and happiness. so far ml is so green flag. he's so cute too.

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