This plot be going nowhere

Luciel January 15, 2024 4:39 pm

Nah cuz I didn't care for anyone tbh. The FL is like, happy happy girl with past trauma from her mom dying, and we get an intresting bit abt that guy who gave her a lovely memory but it's never explained or elaborated? She just seemed like wasted potential. And in the end she suddenly doesn't want to die and gets amnesia or sumthinf LIKE DAM. Her only personality traits were traumatised, happy go lucky, and loves death, so the last part contradicted 33.3% of everything we knew about her in such a stupid way she should've just died tbh, would've been more impactful and make sense.

The guy is just some sadist with mommy issues, not much there, he rlly lieks the girl n wanna die with her but suddenly don't wanna cuz he remembered one good thign his mom told him when he was 5 K,G STOP THAT WAS SO DUMB. NOT HIS MOMMY OSSUES SHINING THROUGH.

it was just so much wasted potential and i was always either " oh what's this, this is pretty cool, oh wait, i guess we aren't gonna learn anythign else about this" like the woman and the weird guy were so intresting but they just dissappear

Responses
    Luciel January 15, 2024 4:41 pm

    I honestly think the author wanted to do so much but in the end just made the scope too big and the depth too shallow

    milk March 27, 2024 5:54 pm
    I honestly think the author wanted to do so much but in the end just made the scope too big and the depth too shallow Luciel

    seriously! little to no resolution at all how can you even call that an ending …