This is so slow, 24 chaps in and it feels like there’s no certain plot, it’s just all over the place…it has potential but it should be more organized and interesting, like at this point there should be at least something to keep us hooked but there’s nothing worth looking forward to. I’ll keep reading but I’ll probably drop it soon if it continues like this
This is so slow, 24 chaps in and it feels like there’s no certain plot, it’s just all over the place…it has potential but it should be more organized and interesting, like at this point there should be at least something to keep us hooked but there’s nothing worth looking forward to. I’ll keep reading but I’ll probably drop it soon if it continues like this