i feel like the ML’s initial incentive to become the perfect man for MC is a bit insufficient. idk, you could say it’s the power of love, but how did the ML become so motivated to become respected, rich and handsome (not to mention low key obsessed) for a guy who basically did not care about him. MC leeched off ML’s money and material items in HS, where was the relationship beyond that?
it just feels a bit too convenient for the MC that hes forced in this situation where he gets the “perfect man”. it just doesn’t feel like he deserves it considering it seems he has barely changed and continues to “put his own enjoyment first.”
just generally there wasn’t enough runtime to flesh out anything, or have any character development. i’m sorry— it escalated from the MC realizing he was in love to a 10 year time skip
i feel like the ML’s initial incentive to become the perfect man for MC is a bit insufficient. idk, you could say it’s the power of love, but how did the ML become so motivated to become respected, rich and handsome (not to mention low key obsessed) for a guy who basically did not care about him. MC leeched off ML’s money and material items in HS, where was the relationship beyond that?
it just feels a bit too convenient for the MC that hes forced in this situation where he gets the “perfect man”. it just doesn’t feel like he deserves it considering it seems he has barely changed and continues to “put his own enjoyment first.”
just generally there wasn’t enough runtime to flesh out anything, or have any character development. i’m sorry— it escalated from the MC realizing he was in love to a 10 year time skip