Finish it
I liked how realistic it is. The things you mentioned that you dislike truly have and still happen to woman—more often than amazing foreplay tbh. He was intense and intimidated her in a lowlife way, but he never raper her. He has great redemption and he gives his entire life to her to make up for everything. I also feel like this story is well rounded with comedy, smut, cuteness, sadness and stupidity.
I dig it and it’s not for everyone, but the best part of this was this was seriously a real-looking girl for once with an ordinary job. This resonated with more people than it didn’t.
I really hate this, idk how soo many ppl likes this one. I cant even finish lol
The fact that de ML forces himself on her to make her PAY A DEBT makes me sick to my stomach. She basically starts liking him after been forced, hes such an idiot, i could never fall in love with a guy like him.
He continues to fuck other woman for a LOOONG time (worst part) and doesnt go down on her a single time (i didnt finish but i bet he never goes), poor girl never had that feeling cuz that bitch only things about himself and that shitty dick.
Sorry, im mad, for me when im reading smut in has to have a A LOT of foreplay, or its boring.
Bye