hmm

Merlot January 13, 2024 12:54 pm

I've read 5 chapters and I'm a bit on the fence about this. So far the story is somewhat jumbled, and she keeps having these endless new skills that she's somehow just aware of and can flawlessly use without ever having trained or practiced. The pacing of the story is also weird, it's as if the artist has included no transition scenes.

I'll give it a few more chapters because it might just be a rocky start with a better development.

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