The writing is very stiff. The plot was okay but it was confusing getting into the rhythm that they actually had feelings for each other and where their feelings started getting more comfortable. The beginning chapters made it seem like they were just using each other cold heartedly and there wasn’t a smooth shift between the contractual feel of their relationship vs. the romantic feel of it.
The writing is very stiff. The plot was okay but it was confusing getting into the rhythm that they actually had feelings for each other and where their feelings started getting more comfortable. The beginning chapters made it seem like they were just using each other cold heartedly and there wasn’t a smooth shift between the contractual feel of their relationship vs. the romantic feel of it.