im so disappointed...this story clearly had so much potential i love the art style and it ...

sapphics lover January 9, 2024 2:01 pm

im so disappointed...this story clearly had so much potential
i love the art style and it had an interesting premise, but...
the main characters werent actually interesting and needed to be fleshed out more.
the story quickly became a drag that i had to force my way through since it was a character focused plot (and the characters were boring)

i also felt that the chemistry between the two main characters was poorly written and showcased.

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    Zuzu January 12, 2024 4:53 pm

    I agree, pretty anti-climactic and the potential of the story and characters just kind of was left to evaporate. The art was lovely but Seemed rushed to wrap up, maybe time issues or sthg. A real pity ☹