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Wow I thought I was the only one thinking this! It's like I missed the prologue or something and I was wondering why there wasn't really great reasoning for the plot/conflicts . The ML is really hot though if anything to keep me reading
I'm glad I'm not the only one thinking this
I didn’t even read this story but I love this comment so much coz it applies to literally so much other shit on this site LMAO comment of the year right here
It's so cliche that the author lowkey expects you to fill in the blanks, and deceive your mind into thinking that there's any substance. No build up, no suspense, shit just happens. So much shit happens in the first 2 chapters when they should really just be introducing the mc and his circumstances but instead their already introducing his trauma, and how his life is going downhill.
I don't give a shit.
I don't know this character well enough to give a flying fuck. There's zero time to process what is even going on, cause as soon as something important happens something else equally as important happens again. Which leads the Mc to have the personality of a dirty flipflop, and act like some kind of npc cause he has no time to react to anything. If your gonna be cliche MAKE IT GOOD, MAKE IT MAKE SENSE