It's feeling like a discount version so far tbh

Lipilu January 6, 2024 7:35 pm

With Penelope, you could really feel her anger, frustration and deep helplessness. I can't place why this can't convey the same yet but it's feeling is more shallow. Ofc first impressions can change so I'll give it a try but without good writing, this premise is hard to pull off. A lot of "villainess" novels are pretty bad lately. They're just riding the trend.

Responses
    Nea January 6, 2024 7:53 pm

    ahh i was supposed to agree im sorry :(

    Lipilu January 6, 2024 11:55 pm
    ahh i was supposed to agree im sorry :( Nea

    I don't mind bestie ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~

    DJnickie January 8, 2024 3:37 pm

    this actually was such a perfect way to put it. The feelings aren't real, I dont feel her resentment for her bio family or the family she designed after them. She has no true drive either