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It’s like the author just took most aspects of a yaoi manhwa (eg the rape, kidnapping, mafia, love at first site etc) and just threw it into the story with no knowledge on how to make it all work together…
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It’s like the author just took most aspects of a yaoi manhwa (eg the rape, kidnapping, mafia, love at first site etc) and just threw it into the story with no knowledge on how to make it all work together…
The story is moving too fast, like 40 things happened in the span of 9 chapters and nothing makes sense, did he just forget that he was kidnapped and raped..? If he had allies hiding, why didn’t he also go into hiding instead of going to a fucking club only to get his ass beat, if he wanted to investigate his dads death he could’ve been smarter about it, nothing was really explained it just happened, art ain’t even allat to keep reading, I dunno if this is worth it…Seems like the story is gonna be short too