Ehhh

che ♡ January 5, 2024 3:20 pm

Omg okay, the lesson that this story taught us is good, yeah, but other than that, it's mehh. So many questions unanswered, plot-holes, inadequate development of their love story, lack of chemistry between the couple... They're always doing the deed. Where is the romance? It's a 3/5 for me

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    erm... January 5, 2024 6:45 pm

    100 percent agree what lessons did even you get from this lol

    che ♡ January 6, 2024 4:17 pm
    100 percent agree what lessons did even you get from this lol erm...

    SHJDSJHDJE likeee, depression consumes the mind could k*ll, and I think it is what the author wants to convey. Sadly, it wasn't executed properly.

    che ♡ January 6, 2024 4:18 pm
    SHJDSJHDJE likeee, depression consumes the mind could k*ll, and I think it is what the author wants to convey. Sadly, it wasn't executed properly. che ♡

    *and could

    erm... January 7, 2024 6:00 am
    SHJDSJHDJE likeee, depression consumes the mind could k*ll, and I think it is what the author wants to convey. Sadly, it wasn't executed properly. che ♡

    ohhh ok you're right and the author most definitely did not execute it well

    i forgot he was even depressed near the end of the novel lmao

    imo author spent too much time on the smut scenes instead of character depth and exploring the mc's depression and sadness

    like we didn't even get a detailed story of him after his family passed away and barely got the full story of his tragedy until the end lmaoooooo

    che ♡ January 7, 2024 3:16 pm
    ohhh ok you're right and the author most definitely did not execute it welli forgot he was even depressed near the end of the novel lmaoimo author spent too much time on the smut scenes instead of character dep... erm...

    That is so true