the story went downhill after chapter 6. this couldve been so good. i was hyped for this b...

kiokio January 4, 2024 2:17 am

the story went downhill after chapter 6. this couldve been so good. i was hyped for this but theyre both so fcking stupid on chapter 7 and up. their dialogues, actions, thought process, internal monologues, and even their own conviction is shit. its like the author forcefully made them go under a specific trope which made this entire series become generic. im devastatedddd why are they like this

Responses
    Joanie January 4, 2024 7:15 pm

    What are you on about

    kiokio January 5, 2024 12:03 am
    What are you on about Joanie

    i could go on a whole essay on it but its honestly too much effort. i mean idk if you noticed but the story became cringy and generic. literally both of them became characters who lost their unique traits with the mc with a back story so quickly becoming mild and the ml who was supposed to have a strong conviction of loving him gently so easily backtracking on his words with his literal actions. its annoying and devastating to me coz this story had potential

    Danny January 7, 2024 11:40 pm
    i could go on a whole essay on it but its honestly too much effort. i mean idk if you noticed but the story became cringy and generic. literally both of them became characters who lost their unique traits with ... kiokio

    Just stop reading diva, we all have different tastes, I think it's a good story so far, and the art is beautiful

    kiokio January 8, 2024 7:33 am
    Just stop reading diva, we all have different tastes, I think it's a good story so far, and the art is beautiful Danny

    how am i a diva for giving constructive criticism get mentally checked maybe

    AWinterWonderLand January 12, 2024 1:46 pm
    how am i a diva for giving constructive criticism get mentally checked maybe kiokio

    Which part of him "backtracked"?!?

    kiokio January 12, 2024 4:06 pm
    Which part of him "backtracked"?!? AWinterWonderLand

    literally just read everything again starting from chapter 7 lol

    Danny January 14, 2024 2:15 pm
    how am i a diva for giving constructive criticism get mentally checked maybe kiokio

    Chill, I call everyone diva, it has nothing to do with your comment, lmao, you need a treatment for anger issues

    kiokio January 14, 2024 4:51 pm
    Chill, I call everyone diva, it has nothing to do with your comment, lmao, you need a treatment for anger issues Danny

    danny, i fr think you need to go out more coz