First, the characters names. They act and talk with korean mannerism, left words like hyung and sunbae, but translated the names? Or is it the authors deed? It doesnt match at all, in a country where dwayne russel and ethan whyatt get in a relationship while jhon ans William Christopher try to fuck them up, they don t call each other hyung or dongsaeng. So the immersion was ruined for me.
There was a character development somehow, but it was clumsy and unnatural since some characters almost did a Pokémon evolution, the very curious and eager ethan turned into a full fledged model and forgot everything he was so interested in when he got the job, and the manwhore, aloof and uninterested dwayne suddenly became fussy and lost all character to become your typical fragile yaoi bottom.
The story... At the beginning there was nothing, just one man chasing another and getting what he wants through sex, then suddenly the story exploded with a background character coming to life to be the villain, doing some shit veeery fast then disappearing back into the background with no consequences to his actions AT ALL.
And the overly honeyed happy ending was just a pain, i just needed it to stop at this point, and was ecstatic when i reached this page I'm writing on.
First, the characters names. They act and talk with korean mannerism, left words like hyung and sunbae, but translated the names? Or is it the authors deed? It doesnt match at all, in a country where dwayne russel and ethan whyatt get in a relationship while jhon ans William Christopher try to fuck them up, they don t call each other hyung or dongsaeng.
So the immersion was ruined for me.
There was a character development somehow, but it was clumsy and unnatural since some characters almost did a Pokémon evolution, the very curious and eager ethan turned into a full fledged model and forgot everything he was so interested in when he got the job, and the manwhore, aloof and uninterested dwayne suddenly became fussy and lost all character to become your typical fragile yaoi bottom.
The story... At the beginning there was nothing, just one man chasing another and getting what he wants through sex, then suddenly the story exploded with a background character coming to life to be the villain, doing some shit veeery fast then disappearing back into the background with no consequences to his actions AT ALL.
And the overly honeyed happy ending was just a pain, i just needed it to stop at this point, and was ecstatic when i reached this page I'm writing on.
It wasn't a nice read for me.