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This is going to be the second time im going to not even tag a story cause its so awful i dont want to be reminded it exists good lord have mercy upon us
Fr its just like est is a side character rather than being the MC
The story is so wish wash they tried to pull off "I'm a Middle-Aged Man Who Got My Adventurer License Revoked" plot
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(Spoiler for that story but for real go read that story its honest to god better)
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were its revealed the og party banished mc to protect him, but with none of the concrete and enticing character.
They are so boring and flat cut out of their respective stereotype here its bad
Strong female childhood friend FL who only wants to do the best
Female mage thats seemingly obsessed with her crush
Laid back older adventure who is big brother
Etc etc
They only come off as disgustingly self righteous and pretentious with their "I'm only doing what's best for you" as if est isn't an adult, he got kicked out from the party he founded, betrayed from his childhood friend, his party mates he considered friends and saw his crush getting it on with his former friend/ party mate (im talking about what seems to be facts from ets's perspective!!!)
I dont care about their perspective i want to see more off him filled with rage and rightfully so
The author must be the kind of gaslighter who talks shit about a friend and the downplays it when found out and gets mad at the friend when they dont forgive them immediately, like "what are u talking about i didn't nothing wrong!"
atrocious