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I agree with everything you said!
It might be implied that the the third seme becomes loyal to the black haired guy in the end, though.
But yes, the middle couple is absolutely the cutest and most considerate with one another.
I like the middle couple more, i wish they have their own story.. the main couple is just bickering until the end.. and the third couple is just mehhhh, the uke is not even loyal to his 'dog-seme' (￣△￣)
Also, this is very fast paced.. i would love it if it's kind of slow burn story..(●￣(ｴ)￣●)