A short but an amazing read. I enjoy how you just continuously find out new things, which keeps your attention. His feelings for Rita didn't feel displaced or forced, which a lot of times does happen in these stories. The ending didn't feel unresolved for me or like it needs more. If this story did continue I'd be happy, but even as it is now it's still a wonderful and fulfilling piece.
A short but an amazing read. I enjoy how you just continuously find out new things, which keeps your attention. His feelings for Rita didn't feel displaced or forced, which a lot of times does happen in these stories. The ending didn't feel unresolved for me or like it needs more. If this story did continue I'd be happy, but even as it is now it's still a wonderful and fulfilling piece.