Cute but

kawaii28chan December 28, 2023 12:04 am

The story is cute but, there is too many holes in the story, and way too many unnecessary misunderstandings ( ̄∇ ̄") like what's the Alpha's job? How did he get the scar? Why did he need therapy when there wz nothing wrong with him expressing himself? His emotions looked fine to me. I understand them say he did it after knowing that the baby won't make it, but he did look like he needed it be4 that. Soo many thing I want to add but I don't want annoy myself anymore. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ from reading this far I know it will be a happy ending, but man, I really think this could've been so much better. The Art is amazing of course (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

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    kawaii28chan December 28, 2023 12:07 am

    I have some typos and I don't know how to edit this. My bad.