I agree with you the writing was so bad especially the Mc like there's a level at how stupid he is especially how he is still friends with that trash and his uncle he is a piece of shit the only likable character here is seme
no because the way one thing just happened after another without even explaining the situations, like their whole relationship came out of nowhere, they met up, hooked up and suddenly theyre madly in love???? over what???? the fluff is cute and all but no depth to the characters or the story whatsoever
Whats with the downvotes?? Ur right
people cant handle the truth
Trueee
Yeah, I really don't understand how people find this good... I get that we can have different tastes, which is ofc totally fine, but when you compare this to other stories, I don't see how anyone could think, this is it.... But well, if they enjoy this, then I guess that's good...
This is honestly so bad I'm wondering if it's AI generated.
I feel like this was written by a 12 year old and I find that extremely uncomfortable, so I'm going with AI generated.... Yes, I'm sorry. I know that's extremely rude to say.