How am I being a hypocrite? I’m just expressing my opinion on this in the comments. I literally never comment for this exact reason like I don’t even say anything usually I was just especially disappointed with this one:/ also how is what I said bs? I jus feel like this story isn’t intentionally a “slow burn” like at all.
First you say they do nothing when they're not together and now you say you don't care what they do when they're not interacting. But their career and showing what they do is important and it's essential for the plot. Those scenes often include their inner thought and how they're struggling with the state of their relationship.
See it’s hard to say everything I want to say w/o writing a whole essay so I had to condense some of my points down, sacrificing clarity, so I’ll just go into more detail. Basically what I meant to say was that while there was a plot a lot of the major points were stretched out across the seasons in a prolonged manner which made the chapters in between seem more like filler than anything cuz they weren’t really progressing the plot nor were they progressing the love story which felt more like the author was just trying to stretch a 50 chap story into a 150 chap. Also I disagree with what u said I don’t think those are necessary at all cuz it’s just the same shit. Mc just b like “I’m not sure if he likes me or not” and “he’d never like someone like me” cuz he has nothing to do other than the plot shit. Like get bro a friend and a motive pls. Like I’m srry he’s just not engaging to me at all. I hope this helps u understand my point better lol thx if u read allat u a real one
Like they don’t have enough chemistry to keep this shit going for longer than 50 chaps this shit should’ve ended at 70 smth max. It feels like she jus milking this shit atp cuz ppl wanna see them get together. Like the secondary story is such a slog to get thru because it’s just doesn’t warrant this many chaps at all and trying to stretch any further is a detriment the story, like those chapters shouldn’t feel like filler they should feel like they’re actually progressing the story and it’s barely doing that. Like this isn’t slow burn y’all it’s just bad storytelling lol. the characters are just doing nothing when they aren’t interacting with each other. They have nothing TO do, in return, making the story borin as hell to read. And I hate to say that bcuz it was interesting asf at first, but now it’s just dragging and it’s annoying. she’s just gotta wrap it up already, like the story is done, the arcs r done, there is nothing else for them to do unless she introduce some new bs drama and I’m not fenna sit here watch that like miss me w that bs. just give the ppl what they want and have them get together like it’s not that serious.