Dense mc

Minoo December 21, 2023 12:59 am

Writing a female mc that is this dense feels like super lazy writing, because it enables the ml’s to get close to her and a lot of romantic interactions that wouldn’t have happened if the female mc had her guard up a little bit more. Honestly I do despise it because I can’t imagine that any girl would truly be this dense and never realise when she is flirted with + it makes her look stupid too. Somehow it also gives me this icky feeling of o woe her she is such a helpless little woman and whoever wants to can forces himself on her - like she seems to have no autonomy of her own body ? Or at least she isn’t setting any boundaries. Maybe this is me overanalyszing this to death but I wonder what kind of message that troop sends to teen girls who read a bunch of shoujos like this

Responses
    BrutallyHon3st December 21, 2023 1:07 am

    Fr, she's dense and this is a poor world building. But still, i would read this for funsies lmao.

    BrutallyHon3st December 21, 2023 1:07 am
    Fr, she's dense and this is a poor world building. But still, i would read this for funsies lmao. BrutallyHon3st

    Thats why manga like this exists

    AichiS. December 21, 2023 2:15 am

    To be fair, I am literally this dense. Like fml I could've dated by now if I was such a dipshit in high school.

    AichiS. December 21, 2023 2:15 am
    To be fair, I am literally this dense. Like fml I could've dated by now if I was such a dipshit in high school. AichiS.

    *wasn't