Messy

Riku December 20, 2023 7:36 pm

Bro this book feels mad messy with like so many unnecessary troupes mixing together, still might read when finished to see the ending lol

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    Marceline December 20, 2023 9:47 pm

    RIGHT! I already have a feeling fl is gonna get with the devil but i lowkey feel a bit bad for the ml’s because it’s not like it their fault they got manipulated but it’s literally annoying to read because the plot is just everywhere tbh so i’ll just wait until it’s finished and skip everything and read the ending

    AkiChi December 21, 2023 4:44 am
    RIGHT! I already have a feeling fl is gonna get with the devil but i lowkey feel a bit bad for the ml’s because it’s not like it their fault they got manipulated but it’s literally annoying to read becaus... Marceline

    Agreed it's quite annoying to read

    Marceline December 21, 2023 5:31 am
    Agreed it's quite annoying to read AkiChi

    I don’t like any of the characters tbh, like i do like the fl because at least she more strong willed and doesn’t act like how typical fl characters in these type of stories act (yk the one that act all sad and naive) when their lover is “mysterious” stolen from them but this story is all over the place especially now where there a devil they didn’t actually kill, and the og heroine was supposedly a “b*tchy and villainous” person before the fl reincarnated into her but in the beginning it says she was kind and caring. Like it just not making sense to me. Not to mention it’s just too messy. I’m here for the drama but this is just drama that’s all over the place it’s like they’re trying to fit every trope into one book.

    Marceline December 21, 2023 5:31 am
    I don’t like any of the characters tbh, like i do like the fl because at least she more strong willed and doesn’t act like how typical fl characters in these type of stories act (yk the one that act all sad... Marceline

    just too much drama*