Responses
I was rereading it and I thought exactly the same thing. The pace was too fast, Keita was stringed along and never had a proper apology for almost killing him. Yeah sure, Kisuke can be all over him but still, it doesn't make it right.
tho, I loved it. But it was too short as it is to have a real character development
I rated this high because I like the overall plot but...
The story, circumstances doesn't justify nor excuse Kisuke's treatment to Keita. let's just say it out loud, he's awful to Keita. yes he saved him but he also almost KILLED him.
sooner or later they would have found out it was Tobisuzu's hair anyway. WITHOUT putting Keita's life in danger.
their love was also abrupt. wished it was way longer because just in a blink of an eye, suddenly Kisuke's head over heels for Keita. without showing any consideration for him before.
this may sound like a rant lol, I just feel really sad for innocent ukes getting mistreated especially from their seme.