Art and plot are great but

Crunchie December 17, 2023 7:46 pm

the over explanation of everything is driving me insane , sometimes simple things like a conversation takes up multiple pages because the uke is overanalysing something simple that’s been said and it’s exhausting to read like why can’t as a reader I think for myself and theres so many flashbacks ALSO I’m not feeling any chemistry between the uke and seme despite the build up , the uke seems to have a poker fake/ lack of expression like Alllllll the time even during sex but hey the story is worth the read

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