At first it was interesting and real cute in the beginning with the two main leads relationship developing. But as the story dragged on, more conflict and tons of rivals were unnecessarily thrown in. There’s at least THREE rival guys thrown into the story for no actual importance except for spicing things up. That’s the issue with a lot of these smut romance stories. They’re good in the beginning but the author wants to drag it out and thinks more drama keeps the readers interested. It all goes downhill when it feels like author have to start doing that.
At first it was interesting and real cute in the beginning with the two main leads relationship developing. But as the story dragged on, more conflict and tons of rivals were unnecessarily thrown in. There’s at least THREE rival guys thrown into the story for no actual importance except for spicing things up. That’s the issue with a lot of these smut romance stories. They’re good in the beginning but the author wants to drag it out and thinks more drama keeps the readers interested. It all goes downhill when it feels like author have to start doing that.