she’s only so innocent because she was incredibly shelter… people get curious as they move away from home and explore new things I get the sense she’s doing that yknow?
I get it..but she also laughed in one chapter bc doya(?) wasn’t cherishing the person he loved and then she proceeds to make out with not one, but two men in the span of 3/4 chapters. I mean the author needs to facilitate the innocent country girl pacing a little more lmao
people have more than one personality. Like what the person above me said she may be innocent but she’s still a grown woman. She did change her mind about the kissing but that’s so normal. I don’t see why a character has to stick to just one personality.
Do you hear yourself? It’s okay to have different personalities depending on social settings, and she can kiss who she likes! It’s the story’s pacing and execution of such that is doodoo.
For the lost lambs— what I would like to see as a reader of a story, is some kind of development where she changes from country girl prude to sexy queen instead of turning it on and off like a phone setting.
And the fault doesn’t lie with her! It’s the writing of the storrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Country girl..innocent…then immediately not innocent…please pick a personality for this girl