Sorry but… I liked it.

Mizu December 15, 2023 4:18 am

Wished it was expanded a bit more. At first sensei was a big no no but when Miki sorted out his feelings I think it settled that. Also, I thought the long haired guy was a rival but he was more of a plot tool then anything. I think they could’ve dragged it out a bit. There was so much going on with his past and certain parts that deserved a whole chapter. Too short I say. I’ve waited years for less…

Responses
    sea_nettle_sapphic October 4, 2024 10:29 pm

    it's been nearly a year, so please could you read it again? if you keep the same view then fine, but I just wanna understand your view,,

    also if you know how to write essays can you write like an essay paragraph, (you don't have to write a full one, but like to make your point and explain it w evidence and quotes n stuff)