The plot's emotive touch is worn out

Heile December 13, 2023 4:58 pm

This started out so good and stirring but right now, the sudden weird pacing and disconnection isn't giving it the impact it should have or am I just jaded?

Responses
    zephaestus February 15, 2024 6:19 pm

    no you're right because they can already wrap it all up and taking hilise's feeling was irrelevant to the pacing of this story lmao. why are they stretching this story so much like dmn, we get it their ancestors are sinners but fl already paid for it so why do every of this thing? it's unnecessary.