The ending seemed a bit rushed :/

Jeon tokkie December 15, 2023 1:05 pm

I'm a Little confused. The seme (blondie) is famous writer and already being suspected so in his own house so many ppl died who was invited by him Isn't he gonna be the main suspect for the police? And the police is gonna track him down since everyone knows his face now? so how can he hide in another country with the uke? He can't continue to be writer and police is gonna suspend his bank acc and card activity too lol so how can they live ever after now.

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    erikino December 14, 2023 4:27 pm

    i thought the rumours were going to be that the author died the same way as all the others ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Jeon tokkie December 15, 2023 1:04 pm
    i thought the rumours were going to be that the author died the same way as all the others ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ erikino

    Well their blood/dna Won't be found plus since everyone knows author's face now sooner or later his dispatch photo is gonna circulate lol

    Bercylee December 24, 2023 10:49 pm

    Bro it's fiction

    Ssssssss February 8, 2024 12:29 am
    Well their blood/dna Won't be found plus since everyone knows author's face now sooner or later his dispatch photo is gonna circulate lol Jeon tokkie

    It’s a really weird story that doesn’t seem to have logic. Don’t sweat it. It’s a weird fiction that didn’t have much significance.

    Jeon tokkie February 8, 2024 9:18 am

    Ya'll ik It's a fiction and horror story but what I meantn is the ending was bad and rushed compared to the build up. Even though the story is unrealistic to begin with still it was going in a gd direction but then at the end the potential kinda disappeared. Like when u have great ideas but don't know how to tie it together

    Ssssssss February 11, 2024 2:47 am
    Ya'll ik It's a fiction and horror story but what I meantn is the ending was bad and rushed compared to the build up. Even though the story is unrealistic to begin with still it was going in a gd direction bu... Jeon tokkie

    Ya, I thought it was going to be better and not the kinds that have so much intercourse and no plot. It did have a potential to have a grander ending.