The art is so beautiful and I liked the ending, I do think the pacing could have been bett...

mawmayapoopsie December 12, 2023 4:10 pm

The art is so beautiful and I liked the ending, I do think the pacing could have been better and a third part should've been added instead of condensing everything into the second part if that makes sense. The ending was kind of predictable I knew J would never let Makoto catch up to him, he was always just out of his grasp, the sex scene was weird and I don't think it fit with any of their personalities. Good story tho

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