Meh the kinks in this is one thing. Its the inconsistencies with the plot that throws everything off. And ur right peps dont gotta read this, tho they can freely comment how they feel about it :D
1- Most of the comments are bout how they are grossed out, though yes, there are some that complain about the lack of plot, which is fine.
2- Can and should are two different things. Just because you can, doesn't mean you should. Remember that this is the work of people that happen to have feelings.
Anyway, I will not further discuss, I get what you mean, but I still think that it is in mean spirit to comment things like the ones here.
yeah XD
I was really looking forward to this, thank you for uploading it <3 I can understand how it is not for most people and that's fine, just move along to something else more to your taste. This isa fantasy and it is one with many kinks and fetishes that are not for the more basic tastes, which is fine. No need to shit on a piece of porn that isn't your type, no one is forcing you to stay and read it.
I repeat, thank you for taking the time and effort for yet another upload Juju, seriously.