Cute enough

desid December 11, 2023 3:29 pm

It's decent enough! It had a good start; FL's and ML's relationship was pretty cute, and the art was pretty consistent. It runs into the usual problems the genre has with pacing, and they set up a lot of stuff but can't develop those points well enough that they come out feeling rushed and nonsensical.

FL has agency in what she does; she doesn't have things randomly fall into her lap or get saved by the ML during tense moments. This and the fact that the couple has a v cute relationship are this manhua's saving grace. Enjoyable quick-ish read.

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    Pumpkinhead December 25, 2023 11:00 am

    i'm reading it now so I'm wondering if they have an age gap? is the FL older?

    Pumpkinhead December 25, 2023 11:05 am
    i'm reading it now so I'm wondering if they have an age gap? is the FL older? Pumpkinhead

    nevermind. she's an adult and he's a minor. I can't read stories with older FL. sorry. huhuhu

    chul1s February 28, 2024 3:57 am
    nevermind. she's an adult and he's a minor. I can't read stories with older FL. sorry. huhuhu Pumpkinhead

    Whats the age gap???!

    Nini March 22, 2024 6:24 am
    Whats the age gap???! chul1s

    The ml is 15 and the fl is an adult but idk the exact age of fl

    lila_user1 April 9, 2024 2:17 pm
    nevermind. she's an adult and he's a minor. I can't read stories with older FL. sorry. huhuhu Pumpkinhead

    but she didnt start anything with him until he was older, she said she would (spoiler alert) consider his confession in 5 years or something like that which was true since they only started dating when he finished the battle and older.