ikr I agree with you, the first couple chapters were somewhat good but the mc has no taste it's like seasoned chicken with water it doesn't taste good. the ML is so fucking possessive a the mc is a fucking stupid and it's hard to read. wish we could have read about mc and how she got to have her family to love her but instead nothing and it weird how the brothers and father are so possessive to her it's weird. hell, now the ML brother like her now the fuck?! like bro she was nice to you anyone can do that how desperate are you to fall for that?! plus, oh look the mc now has a really powerful power that completely were not in the og story!! WOW!! it's starting to sound like a story the author wrote in middle school to make themselves sound cool, it sucks. wish they would have made her be with the villain brother instead of the typical prince trope at least that would have given the story some seasoning. and I going to bet that the ogfl is ether going to like her to or shes going to be a white lotus hoe like what they always do in these stories. (╬￣皿￣)凸
Omg you put it so right!!! Chicken with water is the perfect analog for this story, and it’s nice to know I’m not the only one who is so frustrated and anoyed with this story as to write a long angry comment about it. Like how can be something THIS generic, no original idea, none!
I mean family doesn't really need a reason to love each other??? Or heavily dote on someone in the family idk why you're under the impression that love is supposed to be earned but other than that I agree with everything else.
I wanted to like this so bad, because the first chapter where she just boldly chases after him without a thought had me fooled that the FL be interesting… but I just can’t with her, she never does anything interesting at all. I usually love it when the family loves the FL but they always have a reason for it, like how kind she is, or strong or clever… but this one is just a perfect mary sue for real
Plus idk how others feel about it but her drawing is all over the place even in one chapter, her nose fades in and out of existing, don’t even get me started on her neck lenght