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oh, that would make sense, but I wonder why it was removed? I checked some other sites where this work is uploaded and they all have the same number of chapters too. Is it really this work or perhaps you've read a similar plot? another one from this author maybe and you sorta joined them together since it's been quite a while as you've said?
It's cute, and easy to read which is one of the things I like in graphic novels, however, it's too sudden? There was a plot up until chapter 3, then it just became episodic, don't know if the author is just eager to get them together or they were just given 3 chapters to do their thing originally, nonetheless it could have been better, there are literal oneshots that are able to pull off convincing plotlines in just a chapter. I don't get what made the seme attracted to the uke or the uke to the seme, their devotion to each other seems to spurt out of nowhere, the little tensions here and there that the author tries to incorporate seems halfbaked and eventually fizzles away into an underwhelming subplot. Maybe it's because of translations issues, I'll give it that, still nothing exquisite, I like the art tho.