Read a different story? Or what is your story idea? Clearly if you’re offering such un constructive criticism that nobody asked for you must be a master storyteller…
You don’t have to be a master storyteller to have an opinion on a body of art. Everyone has them try not to shit too much on the ones that don’t look like your own.
Lmao. The fact you're trying to reconstruct the story into your own delusions. Criticize for all I care but you should've known what you were signing up for reading this. You're just a baby. Lazy? I laugh at your judgment.
Waaa waaaa this baby published their opinion and someone didn’t like it. It’s funny because any person with a single independent thought could clearly see where I was coming from and if they didn’t then im sure they had the wherewithal to share their own contrasting opinion and have a regular ol’ debate… you know? Like human beings. You had two choices and you chose this ? Grow up weirdo we’re on a manga website you think everyone’s just gonna love everything?? Obviously not, like where on this green fucking earth do you ever not see people disagreeing with their thoughts on a piece of media. Like for fucks sake you’ve NEVER debated the ending of a movie ?? A tv show?? Shared your thoughts and listened to the other persons perspective ?? They’re both valid Binty!! I promise you I’m not competing for a “who has the best take” contest. I’m not shooting yours down! Would’ve loved to have heard it but nope someone had to come and play fucking thought police. C’mon this is ridiculous. Also when you begin to read something you’re meant to not know what to expect…that’s literally the point ? “Criticize for all I care” you clearly do, you took the time to go ahead and call me a baby for, oh no! Sharing a different opinion from you!! What a laugh. I mean glad you enjoy it tho! (ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Btw I didn’t read that long-ass comment.
I only disagreed with your judgment about calling the story lazy. It’s your opinion and I don’t care but I just found your opinion ridiculous, it's like your statement was formed clearly because the story wasn’t going the way you want it. It’s clear and it shows from your comment lmao. Thanks for proving you're indeed a baby.
Thanks for proving that your hating is based on your own delulu assumptions bahahahha don’t worry I know hard text isn’t your thing so don’t worry about reading it bookie !
Bye bye
This was the “chapter”? Almost seems like a buzzer should be going off like this is just so lazyyyyy and that just goes for the story I appreciate the art but might as well not publish it if it’s this mediocre story I’m sorry if this sounds harsh but I can’t even try to break down the characters at all when this is all we’re given to work with. Very…. Uninspired.