there were two ways the story was gonna go and i was hoping it wasnt this direction but oh well ateast i know not to have any good expectations anymore
at first i kind of didnt mind it that much idk y but now it just feels wrong lmao like thats literally a child in an adult's body
Y'know I'd twitch every time lou and Kenny did the deed because of comment but this story surprising didn't turn out so depressing as I thought with this kind of formula tbh feels like it is a kind of cute(dark undertone) story with not much built up not worth all the hate imo
Don’t like it? Don’t read it
ppl are allowed to give a story a try and then decide if they want to keep reading or not as it progresses. "Don't like it don't read it" is such a childish thing to say when someone expresses their disappointment with certain elements of a story?? Like That's the point of comment sections... to interact, discuss, and maybe gain new perspectives about the artwork....
Reading this has frustrated me so much...Kenny is honestly so stupid and has no shame i hate that instantly they start being sexual...I DO NOT blame Lou tho because Lou is only hypersexual because of his trauma which makes complete sense but some reason the author couldn't have a normal progression of their relationship.
Its so annoying that Kenny will just stupidly give in and keep having sex with Lou when he is not in the correct mindspace to do those thing and then the author just lets it brush off by kenny doing "i can't keep doing this" LIKEEEE yeah no duh
I've just been so frustrated with this since he kissed Lou to calm him down like??????? Using intimacy to dictate his behavior almost like the whole reason he has this trauma in the first place wow makes snese great writing dear author